the book’s proceeding
like a slug in snow
where the hell’d
the plotline go?
The characters are in shambles
in their needless
senseless ramble
the dialogue’s plain
the scenes, a shame
and all the rest
too hard to say.
Because I made an error
and wrote chapter 9
before chapter 1
and now I’m wishing
this book were done
because I’m afraid
that what I’ve made
is nothing less
than an end without a story.

3 thoughts on “

  1. thanks. I wanted to say a better expression might be a slower than molasses in snow too 😉 anyways, good luck on it, I have an english minor so here’s my minor  offer to help proof read it!

  2. but I like writing books backwards. 😦
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